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Review: The Queen’s Assassin by Melissa De La Cruz

Hey y’all! A quick note that the formatting for this post is pretty weak because I’m posting this from my phone with limited connection. So I have to keep it simple today! I’ll update it once I’m home again. ☺️


Caledon Holt is the Kingdom of Renovia’s deadliest weapon. No one alive can best him in brawn or brains, which is why he’s the Guild’s most dangerous member and the Queen’s one and only assassin. He’s also bound to the Queen by an impossible vow–to find the missing Deian Scrolls, the fount of all magical history and knowledge, stolen years ago by a nefarious sect called the Aphrasians.

Shadow has been training all her life to follow in the footsteps of her mother and aunts–to become skilled enough to join the ranks of the Guild. Though magic has been forbidden since the Aphrasian uprising, Shadow has been learning to control her powers in secret, hoping that one day she’ll become an assassin as feared and revered as Caledon Holt.

When a surprise attack brings Shadow and Cal together, they’re forced to team up as assassin and apprentice to hunt down a new sinister threat to Renovia. But as Cal and Shadow grow closer, they’ll uncover a shocking web of lies and secrets that may destroy everything they hold dear. With war on the horizon and true love at risk, they’ll stop at nothing to protect each other and their kingdom in this stunning first novel in the Queen’s Secret series.



It was ok. There’s a chance I’d continue the series, but not in any pressing way. The writing was somewhat weak; there was lots of telling not showing, particularly in the very beginning and end. It weakened the story overall, as it felt distant from the story itself and like a blurb provided midway for an editor to have context. Not really the experience I want as a reader.

The plot is pretty generic, but there’s a reason I keep reading books with a secret royal / royal assassin / demon and magic baseline: I like them. I would say this was definitely more romance than adventure, though. A sprinkle of cave sleeping and near escapes, but overall there was minimal peril or even things going wrong.

The romance was again pretty standard and predictable. It’s a shade of enemies to lovers, with tropes like secret identity and forced close quarters. Enjoyable enough, but nothing truly compelling.

I get the sense that a second book might be better than the first. With so much established now, hopefully the focus could be on fleshing out the plot against the kingdom.

My last note is that this book had no surprises. Everything was very easily accomplished, and the twists were heavily foreshadowed to the point that I’d be kind of stunned if anyone was surprised by the end. Boo.


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4 thoughts on “Review: The Queen’s Assassin by Melissa De La Cruz

  1. Great review 🙂 I read this in January and rated it 3-stars but the more I think about it… The more I get frustrated by many things including the fairly (imo) juvenile writing and character/plot development, so I think my rating would go down now… I’m not even sure whether I’d continue the series but I admit curiosity with how it ended!

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    1. Yeah early on I was already unimpressed with the writing so I knew that wouldn’t carry me through haha. I’m actually ok with leaving the ending where it was! Lol. There wasn’t enough to keep me really wanting more, but enough that I might pick it up in the future. We’ll see which of us bothers to first, eh? ☺️


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